Sorry for my absence last week; I hope not to make a habit of it! This week’s story, inspired by The Reclining Gentleman‘s photo, could almost be a prequel to one I wrote months ago, but hopefully also stands alone. I’d love to read your thoughts.
Preparations
“You’re doing the right thing,” Irene smiled gently at her friend.
“Am I? Every time I think I’m choosing the tunnel with light at the other end it turns out to be headlights on an oncoming train.” Sandy brushed away the tears. “What if I leave him and it’s just worse?”
Irene didn’t say anything.
“It could be worse though,” Sandy insisted. “He never hurts the kids.”
“Hitler never hit his dog.” Irene picked up the bag and slung it over her shoulder. “Next time, bring me stuff for them and then you’re ready. I’m going to miss you, babe.”
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Dear Jennifer,
“Hitler never hit his dog.” is a brilliant comeback. Irene’s a good friend. And you wrote a good story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
I don’t actually know if its true, but I agree with Irene: nobody is all bad, but sometimes someone comes close enough you don’t need to quibble over the details. Thank you as ever.
That was brilliant! Loved this! Talk about a true friend.
Indeed she is. And thanks for you lovely comment
Every time I think I’m choosing the tunnel with light at the other end it turns out to be headlights on an oncoming train. Good line.
Bit of a cliche, but it’s what came to mind when I saw the pic, so I wanted to work it into the story
Not really cliché because you added on that bit about the train.
when in doubt, follow your heart.
Sometimes the heart is conflicted though!
Not a decision to be taken lightly.
Good piece.
True, but not one to be put off indefinitely either. Thanks.
People often think it could be worse until it’s too late. Good story, stands alone.
Absolutely – it could be worse, and it probably will be if she stays. Thanks, and I’m glad it stands alone. It was only after the fact I realised it had a sibling.
You’ve shown her fear and uncertainty really well. And I like the calm, clear voice of the friend, helping her to see reality. A sad story that’s going to have a good ending.
Thanks, Margaret. I’m glad the comparison came off. It’s easy to be certain from the outside but I recently read a fascinating article about why women stay with abusers and it really lit up for me how much of a dilemma that obvious decision can be
Good story. For some being alone is worse than the situation they are in. Good come back with hitler’s dog. It really is only a matter of time.
Loneliness is tough (ooh, I could break into Elton John!) But I think she’s probably experiencing enough of it with him
I just wish that there where more Irenes in this world.. they are sorely needed.
Agreed. I think abuse and isolation often go hand in hand, and support like Irene must make such a difference
Great dialogue and great story. We all need a good friend like that!
I’m lucky enough to have one, and also not to need her in the way Sandy does
The best of all possible worlds 🙂
You are doing the right thing…….. what a lovely way to assure a close good friend.
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Irene is inspiring….
Irene has it here – some good advice. nicely done.
KT
“Hitler never hit his dog.” Great comparison!
Lovely.
Amazing! All i see here is a great work of art.The metaphor is just excellent!
Admittedly, I was left a little confused, but the “Hitler never hit his dog” line is delicious! The kind of zinger I hope I remember, and get to use. 😉 So often, people just remain paralyzed until it’s too late.
Hope you’re still enjoying your gorgeous new boy. Having spent a few weeks with my daughter and 1st grand baby was a reminder of just how hard those early days can be!
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