A week or so ago, I revisited an old FF story from September 2015. It was one I felt had more mileage at the time, but never had chance to expand. This week, I couldn’t tell exactly what the prompt picture (copyright Shaktiki Sharma) showed, but a couple of elements caught my eye and the story and character which emerged reminded me of Lauren. So here she is again, probably a little before Gerry put in an appearance, getting to grips with a change of circumstances.
From The Ground Up
What she’d stand on had always mattered to Lauren.
“Flooring matters” she’d say, poking at seventies carpet or yellow lino as her Grandmother might a stained tablecloth.
“It’s not like we have to eat off it.” Ian, ever pragmatic, had insisted only that there was a floor, never mind the style or state of it.
She picked a stale chip off the cardboard carpet now and gnawed on it. Freedom had its advantages, but home comforts weren’t among them. He’d kept it all when she left – stone inlay and subfloor-heating were as wasted on him as she had been.
The Grandmother poking a stained tablecloth made this for me
ooh, I’m so glad you liked that. I fought to keep it during the edits, because it felt like a strong image to me, even though it was kinda wordy. Thanks for saying that!
A wonderful revisitation…even if I haven’t read the first bit…is there a link to the original?
Should be in the first line of the intro, Morgan – a story entitled “Bespoke”.
sorry, missed that! (sheepish grin)
Not a match made in heaven I think…
Nope! I’m not sure Gerry (see the original story) is “the one” either, but Ian definitely wasn’t a keeper!
Sad mirror of many a marriage!
Love the last line! Just the thought of many a woman!
Yes, I suspect so. She’s lost it all, but maybe there’s a chance to start again too. I don’t envy her
Very good. I love how you’ve used flooring to represent all that was wrong with the relationship. But I feel for her now, losing it all.
Thanks, Margaret. Certainly a desperate step to take; I can’t imagine being in that situation, but many are.